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Hi

I'm Arno, 16, livin in Belgium (if u wanna stalk me go to antwerp).

When I'm not around on steam, which isn't often, I'll be watching tv or playing on the Ps3. In my spare time I also like to jog and swim and stuff like that u kno... with my friends cos otherwise I wouldn't move my ass. So yh that's me, it ain't much but it's good enough. So...

-Hi

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Hi <- Informal Greeting

I'm Arno, 16, living in Belgium (if u wanna*1 stalk me go to antwerp).

When I'm not ?around? on steam, which isn't often, I'll be watching tv*6 or playing on the PS3. In my spare time I also like to jog and swim and stuff like*3 that u know with my friends cos*2 otherwise I wouldn't move my ass*4. So yeah that's me, it ain't*5 much but it's good enough. So... (Two full stops not needed).

-Hi

*1 Want to

*2 Because

*3 Avoid using like, you could use "such as"

*4 Hmmm...

*5 isn't

*6 Capital

A good essay, I've highlighted some mistakes.

27/40 - B

Welcome friend!

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