NinjaMunk 0 Posted March 6, 2012 Hi I'm Arno, 16, livin in Belgium (if u wanna stalk me go to antwerp). When I'm not around on steam, which isn't often, I'll be watching tv or playing on the Ps3. In my spare time I also like to jog and swim and stuff like that u kno... with my friends cos otherwise I wouldn't move my ass. So yh that's me, it ain't much but it's good enough. So... -Hi Quote Share this post Link to post
Lewis 1,276 Posted March 6, 2012 Hi <- Informal GreetingI'm Arno, 16, living in Belgium (if u wanna*1 stalk me go to antwerp). When I'm not ?around? on steam, which isn't often, I'll be watching tv*6 or playing on the PS3. In my spare time I also like to jog and swim and stuff like*3 that u know with my friends cos*2 otherwise I wouldn't move my ass*4. So yeah that's me, it ain't*5 much but it's good enough. So... (Two full stops not needed). -Hi *1 Want to *2 Because *3 Avoid using like, you could use "such as" *4 Hmmm... *5 isn't *6 Capital A good essay, I've highlighted some mistakes. 27/40 - B Welcome friend! Quote Share this post Link to post
McLovin 4 Posted March 6, 2012 Welcome to the forums Ninjamunk, And ignore Lewis hes been around BR people to much. Quote Share this post Link to post
Lewis 1,276 Posted March 6, 2012 And ignore Lewis hes been around BR people to much. gibe moni pls? Quote Share this post Link to post